Friday, 9 March 2007

Just wanted to publish this poem..

Ok... its a poem I wrote long back .. when I was in the 9th Class I think...

WHAT IS GOD........ An Introspection...

Why is our life confined to birth and death?
When we were to die, why were we born?
And mix in such epic proportion of bonds
with those who we love; to leave them to mourn
when we pass away; or get shredded and torn,
to see them fade away into the past, casting away
such gloomy spells of our life that however hard we try,
ebbing them away makes us strong but rather cry,
and seek for breath in the prolonged stifling wound,
and seek for breath in the prolonged stifling wound...


Does God not seem to realize, if He were so wise,
to be able to understand us, get us rid of our demise,
Is it something to do with our previous birth, our past,
the mistakes of our youth- do they still last...
engraved as our sins, threatening us, choking us ?
But isnt God forgiving? Isn't He always right?
Then why did he create us ? - rummage this earth,
steal from it, devour it, and................ ignite,
its woods, its animals, its birds and its soul and life
leaving it to burn; turning a deaf ear to its plight!

Hasn't He then committed a sin; it makes me sit up and think,
if He is actually anything more than a mortal;
and then suddenly, it all rushes into me,
travelling from one end to the other as if He,
has tried and succeeded in communicating with me,
And with this I continue to introspect and think -
If God has ever been more than a symbol of protection,
a figure of paramount hope, the gift of perspiration,
a key to all answers, but a puzzle in Himself,
a reason................. for all reasons.

Kartiek Agarwal (Yeah... and thats me)

8 comments:

AMIT NAYAK said...

chaapp diya .. nice work !!

Unknown said...

beautifully sums up the enigma called existence...awesome for a guy of class 9...

Unknown said...

hey katty itni achhi creativity in 9th only when we concentrate in something else man ...
buddy nice work done kuch to bata kaha se uthaya hain tune ye

Unknown said...

but still it was very nice one man

Unknown said...

i her eby keeping in mind ny inner soul feelings declare dat i was forced to write all d above comments dat displayed d fantastic attitude of dis guy ....m guilty now m sorry god

Unknown said...

I am proud of you my son.Continue to pen your thoughts and feelings .your poem shows the sesitive side of you.nita

Neha Malhotra said...

You can think.
You do think.

Shows in the stuff you write.
And if you aren't lieing about the Class 9 part... Well, you know that is great then!

:)

R.K. said...

hey karteik.......its a brilliant piece of work....amazing and touching as well.....some thoughts that cross everybody's soul but are often difficult to put in words....you have put it beautifully......keep it up....